Into The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions

[Terquem]

Here is a thread for discussing the "In The :Labyrinth" story being posted here on these boards

I hope to get some ideas on how I can add things to the story that will definitely give it more of a "The Fantasy Trip" feel

Also, any feedback is helpful, even criticism.

[Terquem]

Okay,

I'm going to go ahead and start another chapter, but I am nervous. I got myself a warning, over in the Munchkin threads and I am worried that if I am not careful I might get myself banned

I know this is really not the place to be sharing fiction, and I really want to be sure the story feels like it is connected to the game. I'm going to read over some of the rules tonight and look for something that I can connect to the story

[RVA_Grandpa]

I have enjoyed every post of this story. I think it connects well with TFT. Keep up the good work.

[Terquem]

Chapter three, part 15 is up today and I am feeling a bit of a surge so there might be another part this week

[amenditman]

Great story

Lots of tensions, both in the situations and between the characters.

Keep up the good work

[Terquem]

I put up two 1,000 word bits today - and at first got the part numbers wrong

Enjoy part 16 and 17 now

[amenditman]

Another solid episode.
Looking forward to more

[Terquem]

Took a bit of a long break over the holidays.

Here is a short piece, and more will be coming soon.

[Terquem]

I found that throughout the text I was misspelling Thorsz

I'll see if I can fix this.

Does it seem like I am making a good attempt at tying the story into the world of the Thorsz and his Death Tests, or is this just an unnecessary distraction?

[amenditman]

I've been following the story and enjoying it. Seems to fit the general scope of the Death Test scenarios.