(IC) Lost in Dreams (Julian)

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Originally Posted by ericthered

He heads down deeper into the structure, away from the mine. Several of the boys follow him. They introduce themselves to him, each with a simple name: "Brog", "Rails", "Yip".

I'll introduce myself back to them. I'm not sure how I'd ask something abstract like, "why are your names are so short?" Maybe it's the street kid culture here?

Originally Posted by ericthered

Most of them are "european" looking, though Yip has the grey skin and pointed ears: he's a "Yanak".

Hm. Not sure how much to read into that. Maybe there's a big stunting problem here. Foods here don't seem to be nutritious.

Originally Posted by ericthered

They want to know where Julian lives
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The group passes where Julian slept, and continues on.

What exactly do you mean by "passes"? Are we in the rough tunnel now?
I'll point it out along the way.

Originally Posted by ericthered

and one of them wants to see how good he is at catching a tossed coin.

Literally? I can give it a shot. Unless he meant it as a metaphor for panhandling. Then I'm probably awful at it. I'll try to communicate that.

Originally Posted by ericthered

Brog pulls out a vasic stone attatched to a cord around his neck, and a small piece of chalk from his pocket. Then he starts drawing a circular pattern on it.

Are we at a wall or something? Or the entrance to a tunnel?
I try to get a better look at what exactly he's drawing. Is it like a spiral, concentric circles?