[Fanzine] The Path of Cunning

[Prince Charon]

Originally Posted by evileeyore

Not bad. It's got that 'fanzine' vibe. My only recommendation, and it's a 'makes it better for me' recommendation, is to better delineate when an article ends or begins. There were a couple of spots where as I skimmed past an article I had no interest in I stopped to read because I thought another article was beginning, when it was just another 'chapter' header of of the article I was skimming past.

Maybe some sort of header/footer scroll work used when a chapter begins or ends, or even just increasing the article titles another font size or two?

I also think that that would be quite helpful, please.

Having now read the first issue, I think 'The organisation and regulation of magic in the post-war world' is probably the most interesting article for me. Could be useful as a reference in other modern or nearly-modern 'Emergent Magic' settings, like the Modern Earth in Five Earths.