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Join Date: Jul 2005
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ooc: I didn't hear any suggestions to I updated with my own second draft.
AT PHOENIX MANNOR Feebs joins the crowd gawking at the burning stately manor of Phoenix. A couple cops keep people at bay and interview people about what happened. Feebs can detect with his detect ability that the old woman responsible for staking Phoenix is about a mile away, distance increasing. Feebs temporary disad of hearing mental psychic noise all around him makes it difficult for him to tell much more. An ambulance pulls up. Several fire department vehicles pull up. A police officer asks Feebs is ok since it is clear Feebs is in pain (and has the pitiable advantage!). Feebs claims to have seen a car leaving the scene east after the explosion. The cop asks Feebs to sit down with an EMT. The media is nearby. A reporter reports that an explosion occurred heavily damaging the home of iconic vampire rights activist Phoenix. Although the police aren't prepared with a statement, sources on the scene report sighting signs the explosion interrupted some kind of satanic rite, with at least one dead human drained of all his blood found in some rubble. The whereabouts of the home owner are currently unknown. (Suggested changes, die rolls I should make, alternatives? I'm assuming Phoenix can stay hidden or reveal herself at will... The police seem to be focusing on the inside of the mannor. Speaking of which... What does Phoenix have inside the house? Anything incriminating and/or embarrassing (other than the bloodless corpse of Feebs-2, that is?)
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