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Old 11-08-2011, 09:50 PM   #35
ZeonTheUnborn
 
Join Date: Oct 2011
Default Re: Critique/Help with my char

Okay, after some reading, I came up with this set for Rhonin. I changed the vow after writing some more of his backstory. So now if he loses or gets his swords destroyed, he won't be crippled.

ST 13 Will 10
DX 13 Per 10
IQ 10 HP13
HT 12 FP 12

Basic Speed 6 Move 6

Advantages and Perks
Ambidexterity -5
Combat Reflexes - 15
Enhanced Parry (Broadsword) 2 - 10
Signature Gear 4 - 4
Weapon Master (Broadswords) - 20

Weapon Bond
Weapon Bond
Grip Mastery(Katana)

Disads and Quirks
Vow (Find and Kill his mother's killer with her Swords) - 5
Obession(Find his mother's killer) - 10
Pacifism(Cannot Harm Innocents) - 10
Enemy(Rival "Donovan") - 5
Sense of Duty(Companions) - 5
Light Sleeper - 5
Over Confidence - 5
Chummy - 5

Likes home cooked meals
Dislikes disorganization
Humble
Likes to daydream
Horrible Hangovers

skills and techs
Dual Weapon Attack - Broadsword - 16 [5]
Broadsword - 16 (DX+3) [12]
Fast Draw(Broadsword) -14* (DX+1) [1]
Disarming (Broadsword) - 17 +1 [2]
Feint(Broadsword) - 17 +1 [2]
Riding(Equine) - 14 (DX+1) [4]
Carpentry - 10 (IQ+0) [1]
Housekeeping - 10 (IQ+0) [1]
Cooking(Mom's Cooking) - 10 (IQ + 0) [1]
Acrobatics - 13 (DX+0) [4]
Counterattack(Broadsword) - 12 -4 [1]
Retain Weapon(Broadsword) - 17 +1 [2]
Parry Missile - Weapons - 13 DX+0
First Aid/TL 3(Human) - 13 (IQ+3) [8]
Stealth -13 (DX+0) [2]
Judo -12 (DX-1) [2]
Choke Hold(Judo) - 10 [-2]
Arm Lock(Judo) - 13 [+1]
Triangle Choke(Judo) - 8 [-4]
Sweeping Kick(Judo) 9 [-3]


I think some of the techniques added up wrong. But this is the new character sheet. I'll probably re-do it once more after I look over it again.
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