Originally Posted by Onkl (Post 1484023)

The improved version, including Klutz. Thanks for the above Charm, looks tasty!

===The Charm of Fail===
-5 to active defense rolls, -2 to basic speed, DisAd Total Klutz: Any failed DX based roll is a critical fail. Works on any subject up to 300 lbs for 10 minutes up to 20 yards. Subjects resist at -4 to HT.
Lesser Control Magic[5](Charm),
Lesser Control Body[5](-5 to Active Defense Rolls),
Lesser Control Body[5](-2 to Basic Speed),
Lesser Control Body[5](Total Klutz);
Subject Weight: 300 lbs. [3],
Duration: 10 minutes [1],
Range: Normal: 20 yds [6],
Bonus Or Penalty: Broad: -5 [80] (-5 to Active Defense Rolls),
Altered Traits: -40 [8] (-2 to Basic Speed),
Extra Energy: 4 [4] (-4 to Resist with HT roll),
Altered Traits: -15 [3] (Total Klutz).
Cost: 125

Originally Posted by Ghostdancer (Post 1484040)

BTW, all of those Control Body effects should be Destroy Body effects...

Originally Posted by vierasmarius (Post 1484042)

Either one could be justified, though I agree that Destroy (ie, Weaken) Body is the more obvious route. Cost is the same either way.

Originally Posted by Ghostdancer (Post 1484032)

That's not how Extra Energy works, adding extra energy makes a spell harder to dispel by another caster. I've been using Bestows a Penalty to make a spell harder to resist. So if you wanted -4 to resist it would cost an additional 8 energy.

Originally Posted by Onkl (Post 1484181)

Oh, thank you very much! I honestly thought I did it right... thanks for the correction!