[Powers] Chivalry

[lvalero]

I like very much your builds. However

1. I think I would need a "more verbose/detailed" version of the Code of honor. "Be loyal to the 9 virtues" seems too abstract for me

2. Instead of "Nuisance: limited by talent -5%" I would make "aura of courage" a leveled advantage with "Prerequisite: your level in Aura of Courage" can not exceed your talent level. And I would add "selective" so your enemies dont get the bonus.

Anyway. Good job!

[Anders]

Originally Posted by lvalero

I like very much your builds. However

1. I think I would need a "more verbose/detailed" version of the Code of honor. "Be loyal to the 9 virtues" seems too abstract for me

That will be provided in the game.

Originally Posted by lvalero

2. Instead of "Nuisance: limited by talent -5%" I would make "aura of courage" a leveled advantage with "Prerequisite: your level in Aura of Courage" can not exceed your talent level. And I would add "selective" so your enemies dont get the bonus.

Anyway. Good job!

The "Selective" is an excellent suggestion. The other... hmm... there's not a huge difference in cost either way. Meditate upon this I shall.

Edit: The power could work in a DF game as well.

[awesomenessofme1]

Originally Posted by Anders

No one is seeing any egregious flaws in the builds?

Undying Champion should be [46]. You're supposed to round before summing the costs.

[Mysterious Dark Lord v3.2]

Nice Arthurian thing going on here.

The Healing thing can fit in if it has a prerequisite of True Faith or one of the Divine power sources. Laying On Of Hands is a proof of divine favor, while all the rest could be considered training.

[whswhs]

Haven't done a detailed analysis yet. It was the healing ability that jumped out at me.

[whswhs]

Originally Posted by Mysterious Dark Lord v3.2

The Healing thing can fit in if it has a prerequisite of True Faith or one of the Divine power sources. Laying On Of Hands is a proof of divine favor, while all the rest could be considered training.

If it has a divine power source then it has different power modifier than chivalric powers. Not that I'd object to a knight ALSO having divine powers; I just think they should be defined as their own thing.

[Refplace]

You might get some inspiration from Chevaliers and Commanders in Pyramid #3/122

[Varyon]

Originally Posted by Anders

No one is seeing any egregious flaws in the builds?

Aura of Courage has the issue that you frontload the cost, and once you’ve bought your talent up to 4+ levels its nuisance effect is no longer valid. It should probably be a leveled trait, with a note you cannot have more levels than you have levels of talent. It also has the issues that you need to “cast” it (using a maneuver), it can help enemies, and it continues to work for some time after those affected leave the area of effect. Those affected not needing to roll to get the benefit (as a beneficial affliction, normally they’d need to pass an HT+1 check to benefit), the aura not needing to be “cast,” and it only working on those who stay within the area of effect can probably all be considered to be a wash, but avoiding affecting enemies calls for Selective Area +20%. This would put level 1 at [20] (after rounding up from [19.5]), and each additional level would be [+2].

[jason taylor]

It should have Obsessive Compulsion (Lord's Wife). This should be done in a Courtly Love manner with all sorts of nonsense about her "cruelty" and "mockery" and the miserable things she requires of him.

[johndallman]

I'd definitely recommend getting a copy of the Pendragon RPG. It goes into knightly virtues and behaviour in some detail, which will allow more variation in your knights' personalities.