11-06-2018, 12:01 PM | #1 |
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Into The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions
Here is a thread for discussing the "In The :Labyrinth" story being posted here on these boards
I hope to get some ideas on how I can add things to the story that will definitely give it more of a "The Fantasy Trip" feel Also, any feedback is helpful, even criticism. |
11-09-2018, 07:32 PM | #2 |
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Re: In The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions
Okay,
I'm going to go ahead and start another chapter, but I am nervous. I got myself a warning, over in the Munchkin threads and I am worried that if I am not careful I might get myself banned I know this is really not the place to be sharing fiction, and I really want to be sure the story feels like it is connected to the game. I'm going to read over some of the rules tonight and look for something that I can connect to the story |
11-10-2018, 04:48 PM | #3 |
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Re: In The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions
I have enjoyed every post of this story. I think it connects well with TFT. Keep up the good work.
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11-26-2018, 04:19 PM | #4 |
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Re: In The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions
Chapter three, part 15 is up today and I am feeling a bit of a surge so there might be another part this week
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11-26-2018, 06:25 PM | #5 |
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Re: In The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions
Great story
Lots of tensions, both in the situations and between the characters. Keep up the good work |
12-04-2018, 04:19 PM | #6 |
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Re: In The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions
I put up two 1,000 word bits today - and at first got the part numbers wrong
Enjoy part 16 and 17 now |
12-05-2018, 02:47 PM | #7 |
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Re: In The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions
Another solid episode.
Looking forward to more |
01-02-2019, 02:18 PM | #8 |
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Re: In The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions
Took a bit of a long break over the holidays.
Here is a short piece, and more will be coming soon. |
01-03-2019, 09:19 AM | #9 |
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Re: In The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions
I found that throughout the text I was misspelling Thorsz
I'll see if I can fix this. Does it seem like I am making a good attempt at tying the story into the world of the Thorsz and his Death Tests, or is this just an unnecessary distraction? |
01-03-2019, 07:31 PM | #10 |
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Re: In The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions
I've been following the story and enjoying it. Seems to fit the general scope of the Death Test scenarios.
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