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Comments through Section 6 from my first read:

5.07.2 Recommend changing the Note: to "GEVs also get road bonuses..." (change listed in bold). Otherwise the note feels semi-contradictory and/or redundant to the previous sentence.

5.08.1 Does water cost Marines M2 to enter, or M1? 3.02.1 implies M1, but 5.08.1 implies M2...

5.11.3 Looks good to me.

6.01 Change the last sentence to "For most other units,...", since SHVY's don't die automatically.

6.02.1 The reference to the optional SHVY tread rules should be to 13.07, not 6.07.1.

6.07.1 vs. 6.07.3 Change the exception in 6.07.1 to be a reference to 6.07.3, it's much clearer. Also, you might want to swap 6.07.2 and 6.07.3, since .1 and .3 currently refer to ramming Ogres, and .2 refers to ramming other units.

6.07.2 Recommend changing the "title" from "Ramming by GEVs." to "GEVs Ramming other units." since it doesn't apply to GEVs ramming Ogres.