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Old 03-16-2007, 09:31 PM   #67
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Default Re: Updated / New Character Sheets

In the new FP blocks section, the optional text has a redundant segment. Specifically, "Immediately fall unconscious; you can no longer lose FP, further FP costs are lost from your HP instead." I think you should remove the first appearance of this, beside the 0FP boxes, and have all the text start up there beside the boxes instead, to conserve a bit of space. It should save at least a couple of lines' worth, and for those characters with a ton of FP, the text might actually be shorter than the boxes that way.

Other than that, though, I cannot spot anything wrong. Phoenix has really gotten to be rather attractive and quite useful. I love the new levels of flexibility. Thank you very much for this.
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