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Old 11-30-2017, 09:46 AM   #101
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Default Re: Lost in Dreams (Michael)

The closer he gets to the battle, the more chaos there is. The men are spaced out, loading weapons. Giant Gouts of flame appear over the cave, though only one at a time. Each flame triggers his sense. Some of the men are burned.

The monster is on the far side of a tunnel. men rush to the tunnel, fire off their weapons, then rush back to load. The captain stands near the point they're rushing past. He is surrounded by something that Michael can sense. A corresponding rush of energy comes from where he thinks the monster is.

If he wants to actually see the creature, he'll have to go to the gap everyone is rushing to.
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