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Originally Posted by Fred Brackin
I haven't a clue what "Flat Black" means but almost anything in English can be inapproprioate to the right or wrong people in some specific context.
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Sorry, I was unclear. I didn't mean that the reader thinks "Flat Black" is indecent or improper, but only that it seems to have no real connection to the contents of the setting. It suggests things that aren't true, puts the emphasis in the wrong place, etc.