Steve,
Thanks for that and all you are doing. I suspect I've been guilty of howitzer comments in the past.
What would be particularly useful is where you have posted a draft section for comment as you did on
Experience Points.
This gives us a clear and specific topic for asking clarifications etc.
Now obviously you're unlikely to post the entire book piece-meal here but that approach may direct our efforts in a more helpful way for you.
Thanks,
Wayne