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Originally Posted by Terquem
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I am wondering if I should open a new thread for people to talk with me about the story, what works and what doesn’t, and how to possibly make it feel even more like a “The Fantasy Trip” – story
I’m sort of curious to get some feedback on this work, as I am not a professional writer.
Should I begin a chapter 3?
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Yes. Start a new thread. I have resisted writing comments because I didn't want to interrupt the flow of the story, which I think is great. I love the characters and the setting. Keep it going!