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Old 02-12-2020, 03:03 PM   #22
Terquem
 
Join Date: Apr 2018
Location: Idaho Falls
Default Re: In The Labyrinth (the story) - Discussions

I have gone back and done some, little, editing.
I don't think there is a "future" for this work, in terms of publishing, so it is not easy to justify a lot of rework.

But, does it work? I am not a professional writer, and I do not have a formal education in creative writing, so I wonder if I am making simple mistakes in story telling and I don't know it.
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