[wolf90]

Maybe this only bothers me, but I'm going to keep pointing it out:

* Page 4, "Mark III Defending", the words "areas" and "area" should be capitalized.
* Page 4, "GEV Escort", second bullet, the word "area" should be capitalized.

The regions on the map are established as "North Area, Central Area and South Area" on page 3 in "Mark III Attack", so when referring to these regions on page 4, they should all be capitalized. Alternatively, remove the capital "A's" from page 3 and elsewhere on page 4. Consistency is the issue…

In a similar vein (although more trivial than above):

* Page 4, "GEV Escort", first bullet, instead of stating "bottom of the map", it would be more consistent with other passages to state "south end of the map", which is used in multiple other areas.

And then another question re: the problematic section 4.02:

* Page 7, bullet 2 of section 4.02, should there be a parenthetical comment to "(see Section 6)" regarding rams? You have a parenthetical remark for a lesser issue in the passage. I think a cleaner sentence would be "If any unit enters an enemy-occupied hex, creating a ram situation, immediately resolve the ram attack (see Section 6)." But again, this is somewhat trivial...

D.