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I've put a link to it in the second post.

Weak bite is an exotic trait and not appropriate for humans.

Total Colorblindness, which you have taken, is... quite unusual. Did you mean to be totally colorblind (as opposed to red-green colorblindness or something like that)?

The skills and advantages look good. I'm a little surprised he doesn't have some wort of talking skill, given his language investment and acting.