Re: Dwarves of the Shielded-Lands
I like these dwarves, they have a classic feel without being stereotypes.
I'd like more on the martial art: A description of the common tactics, history, etc.. Could give it a lot of flavour.
Right now Feint seems to be included just for munchkins, it doesn't seem to fit with the solid, direct, earthy nature of your Dwarves. But that's just an impression formed without knowledge of the fighting philosophy of modhcloch.
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