Re: wordbound NPCS and overdoing it
Well arguments for or against statting of an npc aside, I think your story is the perfect way to get angels of the War faction into a plot that deals with frocks and frilly things. I can just see the Malakites grinding their teeth while they hand out fliers for the "Town X curtsey day". The pcs will want to have a look into boosting LARP as well as Renaissance and Steampunk fairs... :)
As far as the npc backstory is concerned, it may be somewhat contrived (some might ask what God was thinking doing that in the first place - ineffability only goes so far, after all), but it would not look entirely out of place even in a more sombre campaign.
Nice one! :)
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