Fixed up purty the transcript of the chat session.
Removed real full names. A friend of mine sent me a note this morning--she's applying for a job that wouldn't appreciate roleplaying as a hobby, and needs me to edit some pages with her in them. It reminded me to pull surnames out of this.
Removed most OOC chatter, though there was the one section that was way too funny, and I left it in.
Fixed some minor typos.
Combined some lines that were choppy. I avoided changing wording, though I occasionally made compound sentences with my delete button.
Added an internal hyperlink and shifted around a couple lines, to get the threads to mesh more smoothly.
http://www.angelfire.com/ca2/tHEhERETIC/CareerDay.html
Goes between posts 28 and 29, with a pitstop in 32, in the IC thread.
Have a long way to go on the Angelfire pages I'm afraid, but I have to work on my own college stuff first.