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Old 11-14-2005, 07:33 AM   #1
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Default Submit Errata, for e23 In Nomine products, here

I want to create a thread for errata for the e23 In Nomine products. (NOT for the dead trees versions. Those should have their own submission process on the webpage.) That way, instead of dribbling and drabbing it in, I can bundle up a goodly selection every now and then.

Posts to this thread will, ideally, get read by me, the errata incorporated into 1-3 posts at the top, and then deleted, so it doesn't get unwieldy to grovel through. Then, ideally, when a new version goes up, I'll check through and delete fixed errata.

Possible-errata notes are for things that don't have a fast fix, but I want to remember them, and consider how to tweak/add (and where) without spawning a full re-layout and Scott putting a price on my head.

NOTE! Errata for the print versions of the core rules still go to the print errata pages

Core Rules (Third Printing) errata:
Errata which is now at this page will not be on the forum post. I will be keeping page numbers for minor typos here, for my own evil purposes.

p. 1: No version number showing -- this is now copy 1.1? (Because I could have sworn that the "restricted" notations weren't there before!)
p. 14: ((Must still do this part:)) I'll figure out a rephrasing when the kid isn't asking me if someday we can go to Disneyworld.
p. 24: "a Malakim" should be "a Malakite" (would you say a Mercurians hit squad?)
p. 28: "a point of Essence" -- change to "1 Essence"
p. 29: "a point of Essence" -- change to "1 Essence"
p. 43: "a point of Essence" -- change to "1 Essence"
p. 46, box: "Every point of Essence" should be "Every Essence" or "Every 1 Essence"
p. 46, box: "Cherubs" should be "Cherubim" -- or possibly Seraphim, or just plain angels.
p. 46, box: "3 points of Essence" should be "3 Essence"
p. 49: "a point of Essence" -- change to "1 Essence"
p. 50: "a special rite" -- change to "a special Rite"
p. 50: "an extra point of Essence" -- change to "an extra Essence" or "an extra 1 Essence". This usage (and change) occurs twice in the last paragraph of the first column!
p. 50, Essence (2nd column): "9 points of Essence" -- change to "9 Essence"
p. 50, Regaining Essence section: three errata of "a point of Essence" -- change to "1 Essence" in each case
p. 51, Core Rules - Dominic is the Archangel of Judgement, not Justice.
p. 54: "a point of Essence" -- change to "1 Essence" (2 instances in text)
p. 54: D-HEAD "Spending Essence" -- delete "point of"
p. 56: "in addition to the number of points of Essence spent" should be "in addition to the amount of Essence spent"
p. 59, box: "two Essence" -- change to "2 Essence"
p. 59: "10 points of Essence" -- change to "10 Essence"
p. 71, Fiery Sword: "1 point of Essence" -- change to "1 Essence"
p. 79: "each extra point of Essence" -- change to "every extra Essence"
p. 83: "a Shedim" should be "a Shedite"
p. 85: "an additional point of Essence" -- change to "an additional 1 Essence"
p. 101, box: "a Malakim" should be "a Malakite"
p. 109: "one point of Essence" -- change to "1 Essence"
p. 117, Elohim: "every point of Essence" -- change to "every 1 Essence" or "every Essence." (Unless we want to use "measures" of Essence, in which case there are likely to be a lot of revisions...)
p. 117, Transub: "each point of Essence" -- change to "each Essence" or "every Essence"
p. 152: "a Shedim" should be "a Shedite"
p. 154: "as many points of Essence" -- change to "as much Essence"
p. 157: "one point of Essence" -- change to "1 Essence"
p. 161, Basic Rites: "2 points of Essence" -- change to "2 Essence"
p. 163, Art of Combat: "every point of Essence" -- change to "every 1 Essence" or "every Essence"
p. 163, State of Ophis: "2 points of Essence" -- change to "2 Essence"
p. 171, Shedim: "also regenerate a point of Essence" -- change to "they also get 1 Essence"
p. 173, Shedim: "a Shedim" should be "a Shedite"
p. 173, Captain: "one Essence" --> "1 Essence" and "two Essence" --> "2 Essence"
p. 176: Spurious double periods at the end of the Calabim entry.
p. 176: "Habbalites of the Media" should be "Habbalah of the Media" or "Punishers of the Media"
p. 182: "a Habbalah" should be "a Habbalite"
p. 183: "each point of Essence" --> "every Essence" or "each Essence"
p. 193, Mummies: "1 point of Essence" --> "1 Essence"

Lilith errata:
Most clear errata has been given its own page now. Typos are not included on that page, so I'm leaving them here for my own purposes.

p. 26 - replace picture with the box (boxtext is now on errata page)
p. 33 - "(see below)" should be "(see box)"
p. 37 - 2nd column, missing ")" after "be as such"
p. 42 - Romancing the Throne -- geas-hooks should be Geas-hooks.
Possible Lilith errata: No Superior sigil. Information about Word-bound Free Lilim has not been pulled from the GMG, p. 23. Lilith as the glass ceiling of Lilim not pulled from the IPG (p. 49, "Some Famous Lilim"). Possible comment about Orphaned (ex-)Bound Lilim. Unclarity about what kinds of job-gossip are permitted, on pages 24 and 33; change p. 33 "jobs" to "missions"? Perhaps change "Sample Servitors" to "Sample Lilim"?

Liber Umbrarum errata:

Strange Bedfellows errata:

City on Fire errata:

A Very Nybbas Christmas errata:

Feast of Blades errata:

The Rats' Revenge errata:

In Nomine Lite: The Sorcerer's Impediments:
p. 2: Angels prefer selflessness, thinking of the group above the individual. (Not the whole. Oop.).
p. 2: Ranged Weapons skill should be Ranged Weapon skill.
p. 2: Kris' Ranged Weapon skill on p. 4 is 4, not 2.
p. 2, Essence paragraph: "use songs" should be "use Songs"
p. 3, Combat section: "use a song" should be "use a Song"
p. 4: Merari's Song of Thunder target number is not given in the text.
p. 5: Local History box: Replace "check" with "roll." In Nomine has one make rolls, not checks.
p. 6, 6th paragraph: "such as might wreathe a certain Malakite's hands" -- insert the missing a.
p. 6, 8th paragraph: replace "unsummoning ritual" with "banishing ritual"; ditto the top paragraph of the second column.
p. 6, 8th paragraph: replace "Intelligence check" with "Intelligence roll".
p. 6, 8th paragraph: replace "Knowledge (literature)" with "Knowledge (Literature)".
p. 7, Who's Where?: Replace "Perception check" with "Perception roll".
p. 7, Who's Where?" Replace "the check is at" with "the roll is at".
p. 7: replace the loathsome "loathe" with "loath."
p. 8: In Ummah's Celestial Song of Entropy description, "then you are unaffected by this song" should capitalize "Song."
p, 8: In Ummah's description of her powers, "you are unaffected by this song." should be "you are unaffected." (It's her resonance, not a Song.)
p. 8, Demonic Power: Lowercase "entropy," yes.
p. 8, Ummah's Combat Tactics: "Songs of Entropy" -- strike "of Entropy" or make "Song" singular.

Possible INLite: TSI errata: p. 2, Essence paragraph: "point of Essence" should strike "point of" -- since Exalted stole the cool use of "mote" before I thought of it, Essence has no units.
p. 8: "1 to 3 points of Essence" should "1 to 3 Essence" -- since Exalted stole the good use of "motes" before I thought of it, Essence has no units.
p. 2: Note explicitly that these are stripped-down rules, sometimes keeping the spirit but not the details of the mechanics? A box on Interventions? ("Sometimes, there is a 666, and a 111 -- numbers with Beastly or Trinity implications. No matter who rolls them, the GM may decide to work a divine or infernal miracle, and do whatever will be most dramatic. Demons usually like a 666 result. Angels cheer for a 111. Have fun.") Choir/Band concepts? Word/Superior concepts? Vessels & non-permanence of dying? Put motivations on the PC angels? Strike the "as a Seraph of Destiny is likely to discover" from Alex's write-up? Allude to Dissonance Conditions (if not by name)?

Eli:
Errata which is at this page is not on the forum post here.
p. 7: "cookery classes" -- "Cookery" is a British-ism, and we'll probably change it for that reason (we usually American-ize our text, and this slipped through). However, it is the correct word, and Italian cooking schools do use it in their English sales materials.
p. 14: "per cent" should be "percent"
p. 26, top of second column, missing hyphen in the line-break in the word "relaxation." (It is "rel<linebreak>axation" at the moment.)
p. 31, box: Lack of italics in the opening blurb, and "My Love, My Jaffa" should be bold; it's a book.

Possible Eli errata: p. 32, box: ST, DX, IQ, and HT should be in Bold? p. 34, box: ST, DX, IQ, and HT should be in Bold? No Eli sigil, alas.
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